Sensual TortureSensual Torture:
Wow, this is simply beautiful. I first clicked on it thinking it would be romantic but I actually rather prefer this than what I had in mind. The way you wrote the "skin peeling apart" drew me into the poem. It made me imagine myself in that position: the position of an inevitable death. The originality of the story is definalty that. I've only read one of your other stories but I can tell that you are an amazing writer.
I really enjoyed reading it and I hope that you will continue to write more dark themed poems.
I think a humor piece would be awesome!! BTW- i like you "captian Chenbeard" picture :3