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Wow, this is simply beautiful. I first clicked on it thinking it would be romantic but I actually rather prefer this than what I had in mind. The way you wrote the "skin peeling apart" drew me into the poem. It made me imagine myself in that position: the position of an inevitable death. The originality of the story is definalty that. I've only read one of your other stories but I can tell that you are an amazing writer.

I really enjoyed reading it and I hope that you will continue to write more dark themed poems.

-Genesis Marsh
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luneta-star Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I think a humor piece would be awesome!! BTW- i like you "captian Chenbeard" picture :3
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Professional Writer
Oh and thank you for the critique, eeep, forgot to mention that :icononionxdplz:

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Professional Writer
Perhaps I will after I do a humour piece, I've done too many heavy pieces recently ^^

-Captain Chenbeard of the Black Fedora Pirates :iconwordofchen:
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