Wow, this is simply beautiful. I first clicked on it thinking it would be romantic but I actually rather prefer this than what I had in mind. The way you wrote the "skin peeling apart" drew me into the poem. It made me imagine myself in that position: the position of an inevitable death. The originality of the story is definalty that. I've only read one of your other stories but I can tell that you are an amazing writer.

I really enjoyed reading it and I hope that you will continue to write more dark themed poems.

-Genesis Marsh